KYLE PENONZEK
Well what inspired me to take this phot was that we were just having a skate sesh at thise one spot and there was this little leaf crumpled up on the top of the burm we were skating. Instead of only capturing pictures of my friends skateboarding I decided incoporate the small leaf into the shot while they were skateboarding. To improve on the photo I could have focused mor eof the bur.
Even though I didnt take this photo I thought since I was in the phot i would be able to put it in this portfolio. what inspired us to take this hsot was that we basically had nothing else to do se we decided to go outisde and try to capture some cool portrait shots using the flash on the camera. To be honest since i didnt take this photo i dont want to criticize Adams photography skills he may get a little upset.
As you can see these photos are quite different as one has a more seriuos effect as the other one is a little funny looking especially the person who is in it. the photo on the right was not a planned shot as I just took it spontaneously. where as the one on the left was planned as my brillian tmodel held that pose until i got the shot. as for what I could do better for the photo on the right is I could have brought the eyes into focus a little more, for the photo on the left i could have backed up and brought his entire upper body into the picture.
As we recently had a cold snap and a small dump of snow iIthought I would incoporate this awesome weather into some of my photos. what inspired me to take the phot on the right was that when we went down to the track there were all these pine cones frozen into the ice for the photo on the left the sun was just hitting the snow ontop of the dumpster giving it a nice glisten. I could have improved the photo by bringing the pine cone a little more into focus as the photo on the left has the same problem as if the strip of snow had entirely been in focus it would have looked much better.
These photos were taken early on in the term and near the end as the photo on the right was one of my first photos. Even though it is not a great photo i decided to put it on here to compare it to the one on the as the one on the left shows how I have improved my techniques and skills. I was inspired to take the photo on the left as it shows a flower that has blossomed and also one that hes yet to blossom as it shows the stages and beauty of nature. to improve on the phot on the right i could have only focused the one flower instead i also foucesed the dead one near the top. for the photo on the right icould have brought the ends of the blossomed flower a little more into focus.